[Ncame-students] Initial comments on the NASA write-up

Shuai Shao sshao at auburn.edu
Fri Jul 24 11:55:47 CDT 2020


All,

I have scanned through this documents and made initial comments.
Overall, the following outstanding issues need to be fixed:


  1.  Integration of different sections: each writer needs to read other sections and make sure what they say do not repeat other sections. Otherwise this document won't be coherent.
  2.  Logical flow: each sections needs a clear story line to improve readability. The sections cannot be written like, A et al. did xyz, B et al. did uvw...
  3.  Unpublished data should not be included.
  4.  Published, or soon to be published data needs to be properly cited.
  5.  Reference style: either include DOI or not include DOI. If include, use this format: DOI: 10.1016/j.msea.2019.05.007.   The "https://doi.org/" is not part of the DOI. Also, sometimes the "https://doi.org/" is repeated.
  6.  Superscripts and subscripts need to properly appear.
  7.  Don't put equations in a figure.

Regards,
Shuai

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Shuai Shao, Ph.D.
Associate Professor
Department of Mechanical Engineering
1454 Wiggins Hall
Auburn University
Auburn, AL
Tel: 334-844-4867
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